Hello!!!!!!!! My name's Tia Martiana. I'm 18 years old. I was born in Koba, on March 28, 1990. Now I live in Bandung. I'm a college student of Indonesia University of Education. I study English literature. I love traveling to new places. Besides, I like listening to the music and watching cartoons.
Well, I come from a small family. We are consist of four persons, me, my dad, my mom, and my brother. My mom is a housewife. My dad is contract labor. My brother is a student of 1 Koba Senior High School. He is on grade first now. I live in a very happy family. I love my family so much.
I'm very interested in learning English. I have some nice experiences about English. When I was on grade second of Junior High School, I took a part in a speech contest in my province. The winner of the contest would represent my province in national level. I was the runner-up. I was a little bit disappointed because I was defeated only by a point. Then, on grade second of Senior High School, I took a part in English Debating Contest in province level. I was the fourth. Again! I was fail to compete in national level. Although I never competed in national level, English has given me some nicest experiences I ever had. I thank God for that.
Well, I come from a small family. We are consist of four persons, me, my dad, my mom, and my brother. My mom is a housewife. My dad is contract labor. My brother is a student of 1 Koba Senior High School. He is on grade first now. I live in a very happy family. I love my family so much.
I'm very interested in learning English. I have some nice experiences about English. When I was on grade second of Junior High School, I took a part in a speech contest in my province. The winner of the contest would represent my province in national level. I was the runner-up. I was a little bit disappointed because I was defeated only by a point. Then, on grade second of Senior High School, I took a part in English Debating Contest in province level. I was the fourth. Again! I was fail to compete in national level. Although I never competed in national level, English has given me some nicest experiences I ever had. I thank God for that.
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Tia:
You write well. I like the short but well constructed sentences you used.
I also enjoyed reading what you wrote about yourself and your family. I especially like the part where you wrote about being a participant and one of the winners in the speech and debating contests. I'm sure you will have other chances to compete in other contests and become the champion.
There are a few things that you still need to improve about your writing, but I'm sure they will be easy for you. You seem to have a talent in language.
Please check out the inputs I'm going to post later in our writing club's blog. Don't forget to link it back to your blog so that everybody can stay connected and learn from each other to improve their writing.
Have a good weekend!
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